(Rough cut) My story ended long ago (Rough cut) part one: It was a long time ago. just kid having a awesome time, when some people didn like this kid and yeah this happens at night-time, they went too take him away, tied him up too a pole (and yeah this was grown-ups). sticks and stones was used on this kid until he couldn stay on two feet anymore, then one of grown-ups aproched him with a cermonly knife. (YEAH YOU GUESSED RIGHT NUT-JOBS) he took his knife and pressed against his throat , this now bloody beaten and tied up kid raises his head as blood flows where there should be tears of joy. the man grabbed around the kid neck while slowy choking the life out of the kid, the kid started seing faint stars, but could not breed anymore, two times they killed this kid just too bring him back and do it allover again. the kid did not say anything, for he had hope , care and love in his heart, the kid somehow did know that it was good in one them grown-ups, then the kid started chanting, youtube/watch?v=yoYrLM5rGX8 part two is comming up. Part two: As the kid was chanting, some of the grown-ups got a little scared how could this kid with halv of blod pouring out him doing something like that, as this went on for a couple of min. more grown-ups got scared , using comments like (he is a freak) (kill him now) (whata hell is this kid) they shouted at the kid while the kid was chanting and hoping for some love and care in these grown- ups. and the kid was right! but there was one grown-up among them who shouted out (Enuogh!!!!!).. they others stopped up while this grown-up walked up too the kid holding a pistol in his hand!!!!!!!!! then the grown-up kicked the kid between his legs!!!!, But kid bearly holding too his life just keeped chanting, then the grown-up tok his pistol and pressed it inside the kid mouth, forcing the kid too stop chanting and then pressing the gun inside this kid mouth while blood was dripping of the back of the pistol it sounded like (water-drops hitting the ground) ,then the kid started chanting from inside, it was like the sounds where comming from inside the kid somehow.........Part tree comming up. part three: Now some of the grown-ups was starting to get real scared off this kid chanting while bearly hanging on tho his life, suddenly one of the grown-ups shouted (shit somebody comming , kill the kid and let`s go hurry) the grown-up holding the pistol ripped the pistol out of the kid mouth while cutting up inside of the kid mouth. then the kid stopped chanting. He new that his time on earth was over..As the kid falled down on his knees still tied up, he started hearing his own heart beat slower and slower feeling the darkness embrace him, Then for some reason one of the grown-ups walked up tho this kid and untied his now bloody filled hands and dragged the kid across the field leaving a trail of blood at kid feet`s , dragging the kid onto a egde. (around 30 feets drop too the ground)........Part four comming up. Part four: AT this point the kid was at brink of his death, the grown-up lifted the kid up and held him over the edge while telling the kid that if he ever said anything at all , meaning you survive 30feets drop too the ground, the kid was bearly hanging on too his life, the kid manage too open one of his eyes but can`t see cleary because his eyes was filled with blood after taking sticks and stones too his face and body earlyier. but kid could still make some kind of shadow-like man holding him 30feet drop too the ground (trees, bushes , boulders , rocks , small one , and big ones) at the bottom of the cliff, while holding the kid who bearly hanging on by a thread heard these last words comming from this shadow-like man( if you survive this we will continue hunt you down too finish the job) Then he dropped the kid 30feet of a cliff, as the kid was falling down his jacket was cought on branch hanging around 10 feets above the ground growing from cliff,the jacket slowed the kid desent allmost to a sudden stop before tearing apart and letting the kid land in some bushes making the kid come too a complete stop, .................. part five comming up. Part five:( The New beginning) As the kid laid there in bushes filled with cuts and open wounds, the vind started too blow lighty pushing the clouds away revilling full moon and clearskies making all the stars as far as his cloudy filled bloody eye, that was so badly damaged that he could`n close his eyes anymore, he allmost could`n hear his own heartbeat anymore, he knew but still he could not find in his heart to hate those who did this too him, but he couldn understand how a grown-up would do things like that somebody who only wish was see the stars before going home too his loving mother and father who was waiting for him so they could eat dinner, as kid slowly was drifting and feeling the dark embrace of death pulling him deeper and deeper into abyss, He had only one wish that his mommy and daddy would`n be sad anymore and wished for a New beginning for his mommy and daddy...............THE END
Posted on: Mon, 07 Oct 2013 06:24:33 +0000
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