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A poem I wrote - can I ask for critiques?? Be real, tell it like it is! Thanks! Sweet star that withers in the night, once strong and brilliant, casting light, sorely missed upon the dark, belated images reveal your spark. Eyes of many had dreamed and gazed, seeking knowledge midst your home, vast maze, settling down to become mesmerized, absorbing peace, gently hypnotized. Let not your purpose be forgotten, a single diamond, in field of legions, for what you gifted remains enclosed, spirited wisely in hearts to behold.
Posted on: Wed, 27 Nov 2013 14:22:37 +0000

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