DEEPENING POINT OF VIEW -- CHEAT SHEET By Loretta Eidson In DiAnn Mills new release The Character of Dance & Plot; she defines POV this way- Point of view refers to the character who is experiencing the scene with sensory perception. Writers are instructed to write the scene in the POV character who has the most to lose. Cindy Sproles defines POV in her book Learning the Lingo as – Point of view, simply put, is whose head are you in? The reader sees the action through the eyes of the primary character in a chapter. My shelves overflowed with educational books on how to write an exceptional novel. Each of them suggested deepening POV. I fought with the concept and how to put it into action. It wasn’t until someone from my local writers group simplified the term and suggested I read Rivet Your Readers with Deep Point Of View by Jill Elizabeth Gilbert Nelson. DiAnn, Cindy, and Jill’s books explain deepening POV in more detail, and I recommend them to anyone desiring more clarity on the subject. From that conversation with another writer and by reading the suggested books, I developed my personal cheat sheet: WHEN DEEPENING POV AVOID USING: Thought Felt Knew Wondered Realized Speculated Decided Wished Hoped When Watched The list may be simple but it projects powerful insight into how to structure sentences to deepen a character’s point of view. I hung it above my laptop as a constant reminder of what not to say when striving to write a novel with deep POV.
Posted on: Mon, 28 Oct 2013 13:20:01 +0000