Every time I read this I still love it. New opening to my poem Alas Ophelia. Just cant imagine what normal people - regular FaceBook friends must think of it. Its designed to aggressively confuse even artsy qualified poetry experts confused. Wouldnt confuse critics in the painting or music world but as poetry it seems like a black velvet card trick about architecture. Im thinking now that the next (3rd) verse will include the lines:like that Hamlet joke: does this skull make my butt look to be? Funky. THOUGHTS ? Id love to know how the regular public thinks about this kind of stuff. Alas Ophelia my aquarium puppet they have filled your grave with water, they have dug it up the hill, across the valleys where you move like a skull periscopically Alas Ophelia what a spine you have made of my arm like a shaft of fossilized moonlight I cast your head like a shadow made of bone on a sky where the walls crawl with hands I have entered your moon with my voice parted your marble seas like a vagina ventroquistically.
Posted on: Wed, 09 Apr 2014 19:06:19 +0000