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Hii frnds sorry for not updating story of mine but here is d double update for u part 2 (a)&(b)..read it ..thodi long he..but ull find it little emotional.. SORRY FOR ALL GRAMITCAL MISTAKE.. Part 2(a): On the way of der respective house both thinking about each other ..Kalpana thinks how childish this boy from inner he was cryng like baby!!!!!who can said that he was 20 yr. old but than scold herself & said no he was in pain he lost his parents I can understand how much painfull it is to lost some love one….while Raghav thinks this girl is amazing…how easily she make me come out from my pain…after than they reach at der so called home …Kalpana so her mother Kamla Jadav walking right to left ..left to right she thinks may be aai worried for me a little smile come at her face she hurredly face her mother where her aai ask her where r u Kalpana how cld u do this?pakhi come here for dinner & u left from half dinner…what she think abt u? u know what how much u hurt her by ur this behaviour ???Kalpana suddenly met reality which is very bitter for her..she realize her aai is not worried for her but for her so called daughter pakhi…she ran away from there without answering any questions..she look at her Baba Viththal Jadav who was standing there & listen d whole conversation Kalpana hug her father he said no princess don’t cry it’s not ur fault but suddenly his phone rang & he said Beta it’s important I’ve to take it…Kalpana surprisingly see this&think for evry1 evrything is more important than me & hurriedly go into her room & lock d door..she throw herself on d bed & cry a lot by hiding her face in pillow…then she seat up & open her drawer & bring a photoframe & start talking with it saying why u left me aaji(grandma)???here no1 needs me..why aaji??why?she was sobbing her breath is bery fast her eyes r red coz of crying a lot…she sit on d bed & put her head on pillow & thinking about her life.. FLASHBACK: Kalpana’s father has no work to do he was unemployed that’s y his wife used do household work at Kapoor mantion though she was also pregnant she took care of Nitu kapoor who was passing with complicated pregnancy & her husband Sahil Kapoor busy in his business…Viththal faces many trouble coz he has no work while people of chawl where they stay before r never left any single chance to insult him Becoz of this all insult & hard words Viththal start believing that in this world money is superior the person who has many everyone give him respect..from then he decided to become rich at any cost..he love his wife ,his unborn child ,his mother but his self respect is now become his ego…Kamla & nitu get labour pain at d same day & get to d private hospital ..kamla’s hospital bill paid by Mr.kapoor .viththal can’t bear this he thinks how helpless he is that he can’t pay bill for his wife & baby..Nitu was in her last breath doctor said this after delivery Nitu took promise from kamla that she become always mother of her daughter never make her realize that she has no mother give her equal love as she give to her own daughter Kamla promise her that she give more love to nitu’s daughter than her own daughter…Viththal knows how much costly this bill will be…at that day two little babby girl come in this world one is our angel kalpana &another is Pakhi …at d day of Kalpana ‘s birth viththal Got new job…she consider his daughter as his lucky charm…Kamla as per her promise give more attention n love to pakhi & less towards Kalpana thinking that Kalpana has her aaji & pakhi has no1..years passes & kalpana now 11 yr.old viththal start his own business & they r shifted in flat.. in this 11 yr. she completely known that she is not priority of her mother or father..though her father love her so much but has no time for her as he is busy in earning money & her mother is busy in taking care of pakhi..she has only one in her life her aaji who love her for whom Kalpana is everything she loves kalpana & take greate care of her..in childhood she consider pakhi as her best frnd… pakhi also said this but after time passes she realize that pakhi always use der frndshp for her own benefit & she completely stole her aai from her….many time her aaji try to realize Kamla how much she ignore kalpu but kamla all time ignored her wrds & said aai kalpi ke pass aap ho viththal he pakhi ke pass koi nahi he she needs me..kalpi heard this & from that day she clrly understand that for her aai pakhi come first …she knows her aai love her but not more than pakhi.. She often said her aaji ”Aaji no1 love me aai love pakhi more & baba is busy in earning money no1 love me no1 care for me” her aaji replied ”no beta they love u ..i love u so much kalpu(her aaji used to address her as kalpu)..don’t say that once again…” but aaji I’m no1’s priority I’m always second option for evry1….her aaji smiled at her & said”Kalpu I know u r not priority of ur parents but u know what god make someone for u ur rajkumar ur prince who loves u more than his life more than everything in this world for him u r his priority” Kalpi said innocently “ aaji story vala prince ?????” her aaji nod her head…kalpi then turn from her aaji’s lap & said ”aaji agar pakhi ne use bhi mujse chin liya to agar use wo prince pasand aa gaya to aai use bhi pakhi ko de degi aaji fir me kya karungi??” her aaji realize her fear she also know that it may be happen that kamla give that boy to pakhi if she like him without thinking about her own daughter’s happiness but don’t want to disappoint her kalpu&said “ no beta kuch relation aese hote he jinhe hamse koi nahi chin sakta bappa bhi nahi wo prince sirf tera hoga aur tera hi rahega Bappa ne use sirf tere liye banaya hoga trust me” kalpi ask her curiously aaji me use kese pehchanungi???her aaji laugh at her innocent grandbaby & said ”uski jarurat nahi padegi ..jab wo tere pass hoga tera dil use pehchan lega..” kalpi blush by this sentence as she is much mature than her age coz of her mother’s ignorance & whatever she seen at this little age.. her aaji said ”oh god..my kalpu blushing by name of her prince..what will u do when he comes in ur life…hahaha”kalpi hug her aaji & sleep by hearing d story from her aaji… Than after one day her aaji got major heartattack she was in her last breath..kalpi talk to her aaji ”Aaji plzzz don’t leave me how could u I live without u u know na no1 love me like u ..plzzz aaji don’t leave me”&crying a lot crying like whole ocean’s water will less against her tears…her aaji tell her in her last breath”Kalpu remember my words one day ur prince take u far from this all pain he will give u all happiness of this world he will complete ur all drms” kalpi said”no aaji I want u I don’t know any prince come in my life or not but I want u how cld I talk with u aaji if u dead..her aaji said u write dairy daily thinking that u talking wd ur aaji ur all talks reach at me…&remember me kalpu one day ur prince will come for u but promise me beta u never comprise his love for any1 other by pointing kamla who’s standing near d bed…this is d last wrds of her aaji ..than after kalpi find no1 in her life with whom she can share her pain & happiness.. Her aai know that kalpi is alone still she give all her attention to pakhi…from that day she said pakhi not to call her kalpi again for her she is only KJ…she covered her life between this dairy… FLASHBACK END Kalpi think her aaji’s wrds & put out dairy&write d whole day’s journey as if she is talking with her aaji &than after write abt d boy whom she met at d garden..after some wrds she thought why I’m giving him place in my personal space? Part 2 (B): Here Raghav reach at Kapoor mention &see sahil kapoor sleep in his room &think abt his life.. FLASH BACK: Raghav is very happy with his parents but suddenly his parents start fighting with each other his father start losing his business & one day when he was standing in balcony he found some voice from his father’s study when he went der he saw his father lying at d floor..he was dead..his mother also missing..he thinks his mother left them as she had said in morning to his father…doctor said his father dead coz of heartattack but Raghav know this is not death it’s murder…then after sahil kapoor take over whole business which is in loss & for showing sympathy took raghav at his home.. FLASH BACK END: Raghav stand at d door thinks Mr.kapoor I know u did all these but today I’ve no proof against u but one day I’ll punish u for ur did..i’ll punish u for all crime u did… Raghav lock d door of his room & think how to run from here to USA but in his thinking he saw one innocent face against his eyes he try to remove but …he thinks why I’m thinking so much abt that girl..no I’ve to focus on my goal& my first goal is to go USA ….for completing my gaol it’s necessary that I’ve no weak point …& then he thinks how to get his passport from kapoor&go USA Kalpi thinks abt Raghav n suddenly brushes her thoughts &said no I’ve to focus on my dream I wanted to be big singer one day so that I can prove myself towards this world & my parents too…one day this whole world will dance on my voice….all boys who r running behind pakhi will be my fans..all boys r same they like d girls like pakhi who always care for her look… Both r thinking that der destiny is in der hands they think they cmplt der goals without any inturreption..but both r unknown that someone in d sky make his own goal..they brushes der thoughts for eachother but Bappa had already create his painting for der future…they consider eachother as stranger but don’t know that one day they will love eachother more than der own life more than anyother thing in this wrld… SORRY GUYS IF U FIND THIS UPDATE BORING BUT I HOPE U UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH IMPORTANT THIS CHARECTER SCETCH..BUT DONT WORRY AFTER 1-2 PARTS ALL PARTS HV ONLY RAGNA PROMISE..PLZZZ GV UR CMNTS & SUGGESTION SO THAT I CAN RECTIFY IT..PLZZ CMNT HERE...&LIKE IF U LIKE MY POST...
Posted on: Mon, 22 Sep 2014 04:46:16 +0000

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