I had a chance to post chapter six of Seychelles Survivor today on Fanstory. Its early in the day, but Ive had a few reviews so far. I found this one particularly interesting because this is the reason that Ive taken some serious time away from writing and Ive begun working with professional authors. This review earned me 4 stars, but the comment was worth a million because it pointed out to me that computer software is written by humans, but nothing is better than a human in catching a tense problem or a typo. I really enjoyed the fact that though there was a language barrier, there was an unspoken connection between the two characters. I noticed one typo that messed with the word tense, when Atuini rescues her as he slowly slides his torch would make more sense as he slowly slid* his torch. You also gave enough back story to Kona that made me relate to her. This was a very interesting piece, and I cannot wait to read more of it!
Posted on: Wed, 08 Oct 2014 18:14:16 +0000
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