I heard back from agency, here is their reply...I sent a revision. If interested ill sheer just message me ......... Good Morning Scott! Sorry its taking so long to get back. I can see that your story is important to you and I really think that writing it all out will be a great experience. You’ve done a great job so far and honestly, you don’t have to change anything if you don’t want. But you suggested that you wanted to enhance it a little, so I’ve made some suggestions. They are JUST suggestions! Remember, this story is all yours. I re-wrote the entry paragraph just to set up a “tone” for you and give you an understanding of what it would sound like if you painted out your plot. I’ve also inserted comments for more specific advice. When you are writing, keep in mind that your strongest connection to your readers is through feelings. You aren’t just relaying events. Also note that it’s good to start paragraphs with a big event. It’s also easier for you as a sort of layout. “This happened…this was the result.” I only made edits to the beginning so you have a chance to think about my comments and see how you feel about them. If you like them and you feel like you want to edit the rest of your story alone, then great! If you like them, but still want more help, no problem. Of course, if you don’t like them at all, no worries! We can try again J Let me know. Best wishes, Brittney R. Villalva Content & Communications Specialist Covenant Kids, Inc.
Posted on: Fri, 21 Mar 2014 20:31:51 +0000
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