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Im writing this scene, this chapter and...it doesnt feel right. Ive got the motivation of the characters, the tension, and all that...but it doesnt feel genuine. I think its because I have two characters, King Ramon and the Grand Magister, forcing Menar to make a political move that will let everyone know who he really sides with. The significance of this is huge in a political spectrum, but I think I need to flesh out the King and the Grand Magister in order for this scene to work. Thisll be something for the edits, after I finish the book, if Im right. If Im not, Im going to have to revise A LOT. :-( these intuitive problems with writing are so, so difficult. Any other authors experience this problem? Because my beta readers caught EVERY SINGLE ONE of the intuitive errors I made in The Heartless that I thought Id get away with, so I know this had to be fixed.

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