Nice try, but your English isnt much better than Shmuleys. For instance, you erroneously correct loath to loathe. You also place commas in the wrong places, such as on the bottom of page 2, where you improperly place two commas before and. You also miss a bunch of commas and dashes that are sorely needed to break up the run-on sentences. If youre going to dish it, youve gotta be able to take it. :-)
Posted on: Thu, 15 May 2014 03:16:05 +0000
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