Pls I am a novice. Quickly help me go through this three poems and leave your corrections via comment box. I believe you are the best around. 1 Bright as the Sun As the sun goes so is a day Within its brightness we make a way Will the sun hold on? Nay But my angel has come to stay. At the herald of sun I pray That my angel sees its ray The sun wont be kept at bay But my angel has come to stay. If I find my angel at the hay So many words we will say I know the sun may go away But my angel has come to stay. If it is in the garden we lay I will get a rose for the bouquet When the sun goes well call it a day But my angel has come to stay. 2. The Tender Lily White is the lily In the midst of flowers, Its beauty illuminates at night When the blissful bloom beams. Everything white is good Angels, peace, have the colour Lily is white and beautiful So does this beautiful bride-worth baby. The lily is Azeezat She is one of a kind on earth Her immense value devoid of brat Makes her a lily lying last. 3. Divine Protection For you I call on God To be your defence when theres a sword To guide you from every odd And make you a blessing to the world Dreadful death drawing dirges Dazzling down damaging dears Will evade you all your years For the almighty seal you bear.
Posted on: Tue, 29 Jul 2014 19:02:51 +0000
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