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#Post_for_3rd_year Bad Example Subject: Revisions For Sales Report Hi Jackie, Thanks for sending in that report last week. I read through it yesterday and feel that you need more specific information regarding our sales figures in Chapter 2. I also felt that the tone could be a bit more formal. The report is going to be read by our Executive Team, and needs to reflect our professionalism. Also, I wanted to let you know that Ive scheduled a meeting with the PR department for this Friday, regarding the new ad campaign. Its at 11:00, and will be in the small conference room. Please let me know if you can make that time. Thanks! Monica Can you find out the reason behind its bad?
Posted on: Sat, 15 Mar 2014 17:57:20 +0000

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