Short story time pt.12! What is this place? Its limbo. A dark - TopicsExpress



          

Short story time pt.12! What is this place? Its limbo. A dark figure stands before me. It has a regular human body but no face, its just all black. Limbo? I ask. Whats limbo? Limbo is between heavan and hell. It is the waiting period before you are judged. I look up and see heaven but below my feet lays hell. Tortured souls everywhere I look. Demons crawl and slither through the dead bodies of the lost humans. Above me is heaven. Angels play the harp in the clear blue sky. The grass is a lush green color. Animals run free, but dont hurt the angels. Everything is at peace, but limbo was different. It was neuteral. It was neither bad nor good. The land was all grey and black. Everythinh was depressing and I had to wait here. How long do I have to wait here? Until the decider says so. Whos the decider? You ask to many questions child. The decider? I think to myself. Well I hope I go to heaven. Six weeks goes by and the figure returns to me. The decider has chosen to give you a second chance. Wha? Really? Yes, but if you mess up you will go straight to hell without judgment. I understand. It goes dark. I awake in a hospital with my whole family around me. My mother hugs me and tells me thats shes glad im back. Back? I thought The Doctort came in and told me that I had been in a coma for 3 days. 3 days? But I have been gone for 6 weeks... The Doctor assures me that I was only gone for 3 days. Impossible! Your right I awake agin to find myself back in limbo. The figure is with me. Wha?! What happened? You fell asleep. I was wondering when you would wake up. How long was I out? 2 weeks. But I was gone for 5 minutes!! Thats what it feels like in dreams child. Dreams... Dreams...
Posted on: Mon, 18 Nov 2013 03:27:51 +0000

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