So Ive had this book idea in my head for at least two years now and Ive finally started properly working on it and I was just wondering does this intro interest you/make you want to keep reading? Its very rough but its a start. Ive written around 7 pages now and Im bubbling with ideas I just dont know exactly where I want to take it or what I want to call it. Im one of those writers that cant plan. If I plan it feels forced. Usually I just write and it kinda flows out of me and works. But sometimes that can make it messy. Anyway here it is. Your feedback would be really helpful :) We are born first as sons and daughters of God. We are born in God’s kingdom, heaven, where we live and breathe and love. That is our first home. And then we are sent to earth. I have lived three lives on earth. Once as Georgiana Black in the sixteenth century, I lived until I was forty two, a long life back then. I did not marry or have any children. I was a servant. In my second life, during the nineteenth and twentieth century as Rebecca Gray, I was a farmers daughter. I had three sisters and five brothers and I married one of the local teachers two weeks before my eighteenth birthday. I took on his last name, making me Rebecca Moores. We had four children, all boys. I died at sixty three in the height of the Second World War Then there is my third life. The one I am aware of, the one that is by far the most memorable. The one that I am living right now. My name is Rosa Harris. I am sixteen years old. I have a mother and a father. I have one brother, Adrian Harris. This is my third life. This is the one that I will remember. This is the one no one will forget. Its not meant to give too much away and its not a blurb or anything its just the first page of the book. ~Isabelle
Posted on: Thu, 17 Jul 2014 03:34:40 +0000