hey guys heres part 5 of my Ss. im really happy with all the reviews which you guys gave.. I have written 2 stories on other couple before but to be frank this is my first work which im doing with all my heart and using all my creativity.. and this part which I have written is something I have never tried.. I have given my heart and soul to it please tell me how it it... criticism is always welcome. part 5 Conflicts thought External conflicts are easy to handle because we will have our loved ones with us who give us strength and support to face them, but no matter how much ever you try internal conflicts never seem easy to handle because your loved ones will be against you and a fear that you will loose all of them will reside in your heart. - Personal experience- Antara had lost all her self confidence now. Sitting on her bed all alone in her house she felt she was deceived by fate yet again. She clutched that letter of Raghus friend and sobbed hard. She now didnt know whom to believe and whom not. Her life seemed to change its path within moments. Neither she realized it nor someone was there to make her realize and a support for her to hold on. She felt like what she felt few months ago after loosing her father but the only difference here is the pain eating her away. Right now there was no shoulder to lean on to. She literally was fighting with herself as each second passed. Never in her wildest dreams had she thought that destiny will play such a cruel game with them. She didnt know what to do now. To trust what is written in the letter and make Raghu the culprit of her fathers murder or to believe that Raghu is innocent. She still couldnt digest the fact that was written in the letter. But yes the conflicts running in her mind also questioned her love for Raghu... is it still same... or has it converted into hatred... will she repeat all those promises and vows she did to him just the day before... she had no answers for it. She was completely confused about what to do and what not to... Her state of mind clearly shows that at this moment it is not possible for her to think rationally... yes this reaction of hers is completely accepted... she has all the rights to be confused... but does that mean that she will break all ties with Raghu... even if she does at what mistake of his... was it a crime to trust on his friend blindly... or was it to be unaware of all these happenings... she could not come to conclusion. Life is never easy for anyone unless they are born with a golden spoon in their mouth. Antaras life was full of happiness when she lived with her father and family in Kashmir. She was very attached to her father. But destiny snatched him away in the worst way possible. She came to Mumbai in search of new life... a new beginning... she met Raghu... she hated him... fought with him... but as time went on started caring for him and finally fell in love with him. She was now completely sure that they both were made for each other... she had completely given herself to him the last night... everything was perfect... just then her world came down crashing... the bitter truth had come out in front of her... the one whom she loves from her heart and accepts that he completes her is the same person who is indirectly linked to her fathers death... She cried out loud and broke the vase which was nearby into pieces... the shattered pieces of the vase resembled her life at this state. This braking noise was heard by Aaji and Ruksana who were just entering the house. Aaji had gone to Ruksanas parlour to enquire about antara and her sudden disappearance. Both of them rushed upstairs to find antara breathing heavily. The vase lies broken at its place. She was holding a paper in her hand and her hand and her eyes were red. Dry tear stains on her face indicated that she was crying from a long time. They both got shocked to see her in that state. Aaji rushed towards antara and held her Aaji - antara... beta yeh kya hal bana rakha hai tune apni... Antara sobbed hard and hugged aaji. She cried more in her arms. Antara - aaji mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha mein kya karun... please mujhe koi rasta dikhao aaji... mein toot rahi hoon... she cried Aaji - tu pehle baith yeha.. she made her sit on the bed... Ruksana jaake paani laa antara ke liye. Ruksana - haan aaji... she goes down stairs Aaji wipes antaras tears and asks Aaji - ab bata kya baat hai... Antara - aaji woh.. woh... she couldnt muster up what she wanted to say. So she just held the letter and showed it to aaji. Aaji took the letter from her and started to read... after completely reading it she was horrified... she now completely understood what antara was going through. The letter clearly stated that raghu was tricked into placing that bomb which was in the form of a gift. It even stated that raghu should not blame himself because it was aman who made him do that. Aaji left the letter from her hand and it fell down. Ruksana came with a glass of water and saw both of them in almost similar state. She took the water and held towards antara. Antara took the glass of water ffrom her hand and gave it to aaji Aaji -tu pe le tujhe zyada zaroorat hai Antara - nahi aaji aap ko bhi sadma laga hai... Aaji drinks the water and tells Aaji - tujhe yeh letter kaha se mila Antara - aaji woh... she starts to collect when she got the leter... haan aaji woh aapne sadiya lane ke liye kaha tha na toh mei un sadiyon ko andar rakh rahi thi tabhi yeh letter gira tha meine wahi use uthaake padhliya tha... Antara - toh yeh daya ke kamre mein tha Antara - aaji raghu shayad iske baare mein nahi janta hoga Aaji - haan use iske bare mein kuch bhi pata nahi hai...tu... ab kya karne wali hai Antara - pata nahi aaji.. kuch samjh nahi aaraha ki mein kya karun... mujhe samjh mein nahi aaraha ki mein kis par vishwas karoon... aaj yeh baat jaan kar meri puri zindagi hilgayi hai... please aaji mujhe batayiye mein kya karoon Aaji lovingly strokes her hair and says Aaji - meri bachi... mein sirf itna kahungi tu apne dil ke gehrai(deep) mein jaa kar soch... mein jaanti hun ki tere maan aur dil ke eech lad rahi ho... par yeh bhi zarori hai ki tumhara raghu keliye pyaar aur vishwas ko parkh lo... Antara - kyun aaji... kismet ne mujhe aur raghu ko kyun milaya... jab ki woh janta ha ki hume kabhi milna na tha... kyun aise khwad dikhaya jab use aise tutna hi tha... Aaji - bitiya kismat ka khel aaj tak koi bhi aaj tak samajh nahi paya hai jo hona tha woh hogaya... ab bas tu kuch der ke liye aram kar le.. Antara - lekin aaji Aaji - mein kuch nahi sunne wali... tu chup chap aaram kar mein raat ko aaungi tumhere pass baat karne keliye... thik hai... aur Ruksana tu isse sula dena aur yehi rehna... Ruksana - ji aaji.. Aaji goes away from there to naik sadan. She directly goes to DMs room. Before entering she heard DM talking on the phone about aman. She quickly hid herself to hear what she was talking about. DM - suno uska theek se rakhna aur mein aaj raat ko aarahi hu toh sab kuch tayaar rakhna... aur haan use kahi jaane mat dena... kahi pichle baar ki tarah chut gaya toh tumlogon ki khair nahi... DM cuts the call and goes out of the room without noticing aaji as she was hiding. Aaji thought Aaji -toh aman Daya ke kabse mein hai... ho na ho us bomb blast mein daya ka hath hai... lekin daya aise kuch kyun kiya hoga... pata lagana padega... At night... antara gets up after getting a 2hours of nap. She sees that the time was 9:30. Ruksana was sleeping at the other end of the bed. She comes out of the bed and goes downstairs to kitchen. She drinks a glass of water. Today was a lot for her she still dint know what to do next... she was clear that she still loves raghu from her heart but what will be her next step... how will she interrogate the whole truth... She came out of the house to take in fresh air.. just as she steps out she sees DM going in car somewhere alone... she gets suspicious... she sees Machmach in his garage packing up. She goes to him and asks him to take out the jeep and follow DM... he gets a bit perplexed but does as she said... on the way he questions her about what was going on then antara says Antara - wo aaj mai ke room se mujhe ek letter mila jo raghu ne aman ko diya tha mujhe dekhna hai ki woh letter mai ke hath mein kaisa aaya Machmach - arre haan bhai ne bhi bola tha mujhe ki koi letter th jo aman ne use diya tha gayab hone se pehle... Antara -gayab.. aman gayab hogya tha kya Machmach - haan... mei aur bhai bhi ue kabse dundhne ki koshish kar rahe hai Antara thinks and finally reaches to a conclusion that DM maybe involved in the bomb blast in which her father died.. Suddenly Machmach stops the jeep. Antara - gadi kyun roka Machmach - woh mai ne gadi ko rok liye... waise hum yeha ek baar aachuke hai aman ke talash mein... woh hume yeha nahi mila tha... Antara - shayad ab mil jaye... Machmach - Matlab... Antara - shayad pichle baar woh tumse chut gaya hoga... hum andar chalte hai kuch aadmi honge bahar tum unhe handle koroge na Machmach - bharosa rakh yedi kisko pata bhi nahi chalega ki hum andar gaye hai Antara - toh chalo chale andar Machmach easily handles the persons who was standing out by fooling them... he does so so that DM wont get suspicious that someone was here following her... they both go inside and hide... they saw that aman was tied up on to a chair and DM was sitting on a rocking chair infront of him... they kept quiet to hear the conversation DM - toh aman Miyan... umeed hai ki acchi khatirdari ho rahi hogi aapki... tumhe dekh kar daya aati hai mujhe par kya karun tumne raghu ko wo khat likh kar majboor kiya tumhari aise halat karne keliye... Aman - mera jo karna chati hai aap woh kar lijiye par raghu ko mein sachai bata kar hi rahunga... ki uss bomb ko aapne hi mujhe diya tha... aatankwadi toh mein hun hi lekin aap mujhse bhi badi aatankwadi hai... kyunki aap to do do chehra rakhta hai apna kamse kam mein toh aisa nahi karta... Antara and Machmach were both shocked after hearing what aman said... they dint know how to react... never in their wildest dreams the thought that DM woulddo such a thing. Antara was beyond any state of reaction when she realised that DM is the real culprit of her fathers death... They saw DM splach cold water on to amans face and she got up and slapped aman hard... DM - sach kaha tumne... haan mein hun... aur mein aisa khel khelne wali hun ki raghu humesha humesha keliye mera gulam banke rehjayega Aman - aap aisa kyun kar rahi hai... raghu toh aapko apna bhagwan manta hai... toh phir kyun DM - kyunki nafrat karti hun mein us se aur badla lena chahti hun use apna gulam banake Aman - usne aapse bhala kya chena hai ki aap use itna dard dena chahti hai... DM gives aother tight slap to him and kicks him on to the ground DM - har baat batana zarori nahi hota... She walks off away from there and informs her men to keep a close eye on Aman. All this was heard by Machmach and antara. Both were hell shock beyond any state to react they both were confused about what to do... antara spoke upin a low whisper Anatara - machmch hume aman ko yeha se bahar nikal na hoga... wohi hume pura sachai saaf saf bateye ga... tum use apne ghar me rakhna tumhe koi problem nahi hogi na.. Machmach - nhi yedi aur ab toh mein iss saale se baat ugalwa ke hi baithunnga... mein bahar ke aadmiyon ko sambhalti hun tu jaake aman ko rassi(rope) se nikal Anara - aur Machmach unka phone ko bhi switch of kar dena mai ko yeh baat pata nahi chalna chahiye... Machmach nods and they execute their plan. He beats the hell out of DMs goons and takes away their mobile phones before they could contact anyone. Antara releases aman. He wanted to say something when antara stops and tell him to just follow her. In some time they had aman in the jeep heading towards machmachs house. Antara was sitting in the jeep and she thought - Daya mai... ab aap jo bhi kijiye mein raghu ka sath nahi Chodne wali... mein use bohot pyaar karti hun aur uske aakhon(eyes) se aapkeliye jo andha vishvas ka parda utha ke hi rahungi kyunki raghu mera jaan hai... mein uske bina nahi jee sakti... aapne yeh game Shuru kiya hai toh isko anjaam mei hi dungi. ------------------------- Precap - twist bada wala...
Posted on: Sat, 23 Nov 2013 10:49:39 +0000
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