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some of my story let me know what you guys think There are five people in this story Willy Wonka the guy who sell his factory to Nathan Wonka. Lauren Beauregarde a girl who loves gum more then anything in the world. Holly Salt a girl who gets anything she wants from her parents. The Oompa Loompas they become Nathan Wonka workers when Nathan Wonka buys Willy Wonka chocolate factory. Nathan Wonka the guy who buys Willy Wonka chocolate factory and then he owns it in the end. This story takes place in Christchurch on a winter night Nathan Wonka goes outside his house and grabs the newspaper it said on the front page Willy Wonka wants to sell his chocolate factory he getting old and he wants to give it to someone who can make new things to sell to get money to keep it open you can make often tomorrow outside Willy Wonka chocolate factory at 10 am updates to come to who bought Willy Wonka chocolate factory Nathan Wonka check his wallet to see how much money he had in it he had $10000000 in it so Nathan Wonka went to bed to get ready for going to Willy Wonka chocolate factory to buy it the next day Nathan Wonka got up at 8am to make his breakfast Nathan Wonka thought about a new idea he thought he would make breakfast chewing gum instead of wasting time making breakfast in the morning so Nathan Wonka found a machine and push a button on it and out of it came a stick of chewing gum then there was a knock at the door Nathan Wonka open and there was Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt and there parents Nathan Wonka can you look after my daughters we got to go into town and buy Willy Wonka chocolate factory for Holly Salt I was bout to go out to town to is it ok if I take your daughters into town to its fine said there parents ok well see you I just eat my breakfast girls and bush my tenth then we can go into town girls kiss your parents good bye good bye mum and dad said Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt and they kiss and hug there parents good bye Lauren and Holly said there parents and there parents walk out of the door what that in your hand said Lauren Beauregarde its breakfast chewing gum said Nathan Wonka gum I love gum said Lauren Beauregarde can I try it said Lauren Beauregarde I wouldn’t if I was you it still not right said Nathan Wonka but before Nathan Wonka could stop her she grab the gum with her fat hand and started chewing on the gum here come breakfast coco pops and milk and for after breakfast blueberry pie and ice cream said Lauren Beauregarde what happen to her nose said Holly Salt well I told you it is not right said Nathan Wonka she swelling up said Holly Salt her hair is changing colour said Nathan Wonka Lauren Beauregarde was getting fatter and fatter still chewing the gum she was so fat her head hit the roof why is she so fat said Holly Salt because she a blueberry said Nathan Wonka we better get ready for going into town I will get a trailer so we can put Lauren Beauregarde on it said Nathan Wonka Nathan went into the garage and found a trailer and his 4wrd dive so Nathan Wonka put the trailer on the back tow bar of Nathan 4wrd dive and then Nathan Wonka got into his 4wrd drive then he back the 4wrd dive out of the garage and park it by the house and went inside to grab Lauren Beauregarde when he got inside Lauren Beauregarde was still chewing the gum Nathan Wonka thought how are we going get her out of the house she to big to roll her out of the house she could break my house so Nathan Wonka went into the shed and grab a ladder and a chain saw and then went to the side of the house and place the ladder and climb to the roof and started chian sawing at the roof and finally he got though the roof and saw Lauren Beauregarde head ok we should be able to get her out of the house now Nathan Wonka climb down the ladder and went back inside and help Holly Salt roll Lauren outside it took them a hour to get Lauren Beauregarde outside then Nathan open the trailer door and help Holly lift Lauren Beauregarde on to the trailer it took them other hour to get Lauren on to the trailer and then Nathan Wonka and Holly Salt got into the 4wrd drive and took off into town half way to Willy Wonka chocolate factory Lauren Beauregarde friends saw her and started laughing one of them said who is that girl on the back of the trailer I think it Lauren Beauregarde said one of the girls said it is said the other girls said and they started to laughing and they both said how did she get so big I bet she ate her sister Lauren Beauregarde was to fat to put head down she felt a shame she tried to say what happened but her lips where so fat and they where swelled no words came out and then they finally got to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory Nathan Wonka got out of the 4wrd drive and said to Holly Salt to stay in the 4wrd dive and then went to the trailer and check on Lauren Beauregarde you better stay here too said Nathan Wonka Nathan Wonka went to the chocolate factory door and knock on the door and Willy Wonka open the door Hi Willy Wonka I would like to buy your chocolate factory ok I give it to you if you can make more money then the other people offered then you might get it said Willy Wonka ok I can give you $1000000 for it ok come back tomorrow and I will let you know who gets so Nathan left Willy Wonka chocolate factory and got back in the 4wrd drive and thought I cannot take Lauren Beauregarde back to my place I will have to get her sold and pick her up tomorrow if I get Willy Wonka chocolate factory so he drove back to his house and made a sigh for sale do anything to this fat blueberry girl for one day and then he got back into the 4wrd drive and then he drove off again and stop in town with Holly Salt in the middle of the street with his sigh Holly Salt told people when they walk past that Lauren Beauregarde would make a good anything but when they thought no one buy her Violet Beauregarde walk past and thought I will buy her for the day because I know how it feels to be a blueberry how much do you want for this blueberry girl? Said Violet Beauregarde how much you got? Said Nathan Wonka $1000000 that’s how much I got on me said Violet Beauregarde that’s how much we want said Nathan Wonka ok said Violet Beauregarde and handed the money to Nathan Wonka we can follow you and drop her off is your house big enough to fit a big blueberry in it? Ask Nathan Wonka oh yes I use to be a blueberry said Violet Beauregarde really so your house is big enough said Nathan Wonka yes said Violet Beauregarde and thanks for driving to my house to drop off the blueberry girl it is lovely of you said Violet Beauregarde so they lot of them went into there cars and Nathan Wonka followed Violet Beauregarde to her house her house was half way to Willy Wonka chocolate factory they stop here where are said Violet Beauregarde this is my house when they got off there cars so they all went to the back of Nathan Wonka 4wrd drive to the trailer where Lauren Beauregarde was and they lifted her off the trailer witch took them half a hour and they rolled her inside and rolled her into Violet Beauregarde room and Nathan Wonka said good bye to Violet Beauregarde and said he be back in the morning before they go to Willy Wonka chocolate factory so Nathan Wonka and Holly Salt got back into the 4wrd drive and drove back to Nathan Wonka house the time they got home it was 12am and the parents of Lauren Beauregarde where my other kid said Holly Salt parents we had to sell her for the day I had to wrack my house to get her out I will pick her up tomorrow is it ok if I stay at your house for tonight because if I stay at my house I could to die by the cold said Nathan Wonka sure but you have to pick up Lauren Beauregarde tomorrow I will don’t you worry said Nathan Wonka so they drove back to they to there place they got there and got out of there cars and went inside to their bedrooms and went to sleep but when Violet Beauregarde got home she did not go to sleep Violet Beauregarde thought what can I do to her for the day she thought I could lock her up in the garage because she fat enough and she can drink the blueberry juice out of her so Violet Beauregarde rolled Lauren Beauregarde into the garage and left the garage and lock the door to the garage so Lauren Beauregarde could not get out then Violet Beauregarde went to sleep Lauren Beauregarde tried everything to get out of the garage but she was to fat to move it was the next day Nathan Wonka got up early and woke up Holly Salt sorry to wake you up but we can go to Wendy’s for breakfast then pick up your sister then go to Willy Wonka chocolate factory to see if I get it so they got into Nathan 4wrd drive and took off to Wendy’s to get breakfast and took they went though the drive few when they got there food the ate it quickly they took off to Violet Beauregarde house it took them a hour they where there in a hour they out of the 4wrd then they went inside Violet Beauregarde house and ask where Lauren Beauregarde she in my garage I put her in there so she would not run away said Violet Beauregarde ok we will get her and put her on the back of the trailer again said Nathan Wonka so they went to the garage Violet Beauregarde unlock the garage door and there was Lauren Beauregarde still as fat as she was yesterday so Violet Beauregarde open the big garage door so Nathan Wonka could get his 4wrd drive in the garage so Nathan Wonka prank his 4wrd drive in the garage Nathan Wonka open the trailer door and all 3 of them lifted Lauren Beauregarde on to the trailer then Holly Salt got into the 4wrd drive Nathan Wonka thank Violet Beauregarde for looking after Lauren Beauregarde and then Nathan Wonka got into his 4wrd drive and then they took off waving good bye as they left they got to Willy Wonka chocolate factory in a hour Nathan Wonka said to Holly Salt wait here then Nathan Wonka got out of the 4wrd drive and on the chocolate factory door Hi Nathan Wonka you come back to the chocolate factory it is yours now said Willy Wonka thanks Willy Wonka said Nathan Wonka I got a quick question ask do you have a machine to turn a blueberry girl back to and not to be violet? Said Nathan Wonka sure I got two of those machines I will have to show you how to us it before I leave my factory in your hands the machines are in the juicing room the juicing machine squeezed the juice out of blueberry girls and the other machine its called changing girls back to there normal colour to there skin said Willy Wonka so they went back to the trailer and lifted Lauren Beauregarde off trailer and rolled her inside Holly Salt followed close be hide then the rolled Lauren Beauregarde though the chocolate factory door Nathan Wonka said this place is huge where there machines I get tried of pushing this blueberry girl around said Nathan Wonka and there it was a big sigh saying the juicing room and Willy Wonka open the door and there it was the juicing machine and there was the other machine called changing girls back to there normal colour skin so they rolled Lauren Beauregarde to the juicing machine and then Willy Wonka push a button on the machine and it suck all the juice out of Lauren Beauregarde and they filled up lots of buckets of blueberry juice then Lauren Beauregarde was skinny again but she was still violet all over so they went to the next machine and Willy Wonka push a button again and this time Lauren Beauregarde colour of her skin went back to its normal colour and then Willy Wonka said that’s all I need to show you now you can have the factory all to yourself now Thanks said Nathan Wonka I give you the keys to my chocolate factory and you can live in it tonight you can move all your stuff in here today so Willy Wonka left and said good bye to Nathan Wonka then Nathan Wonka left and lock the door to his new chocolate factory and got back they all got back into Nathan Wonka 4wrd drive and this time Lauren Beauregarde was able to sit in the 4wrd drive with Nathan Wonka and Holly Salt they took a hour to get back to there parents house and then they got out of Nathan Wonka 4wrd and knock on the door and there was Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt parents answer the door and Nathan Wonka said here are your kids Lauren Beauregarde parents said to Lauren Beauregarde never eat gum like that again you lucky Nathan Wonka could turn back to a normally girl and not a fat blueberry girl anymore said Lauren Beauregarde parents and then Nathan Wonka said good bye to Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt and there parents and left there house and got into his 4wrd drive and drove back to his house and got his stuff and put it into his 4wrd and then he put his bed into his 4wrd drive last and then he took off back to his chocolate factory it took him a hour to get back to his chocolate factory and then he got there and here got out of his 4wrd drive and went up to the chocolate factory door and unlock it and then he drove his 4wrd drive though the chocolate factory door because the door was huge and then he park his 4wrd drive inside a room this room is only for 4wrd drive only this door is voice proof it only open to your voice Nathan Wonka on the sigh lots of care from your best friend now Willy Wonka so Nathan Wonka crash his 4wrd drive into the door but he and 4wrd drive is fine so he got out of his 4wrd drive and said Hi Nathan Wonka here open up door please said Nathan Wonka welcome Nathan Wonka how are you today said the door good said Nathan Wonka ok you can come into now said the door and then Nathan Wonka park his car and got all his stuff out off the 4wrd drive and then he come back to get his bed last out of the 4wrd drive and then he found a room Nathan Wonka bedroom now use to be Willy Wonka old bedroom so Nathan Wonka got inside the bedroom and put his bed in the bedroom and went down stairs to the lounge and thought he give out golden tickets so people can visit his chocolate factory so he got his Oompa Loompas to help him write on the golden ticket and then he started founding things to put the golden ticket in so he put one in a Nathan Wonka chocolate bar and the other in a Nathan Wonka chewing gum then he rang up some Christchurch shops to see if they can buy the things with the golden ticket in it so he rang up a owner called Nathan Wonka candy shop sells anything that’s Nathan Wonka sells to own shore that’s he dose not want in his chocolate it said in the ad on newspaper so Nathan called the number hi Nathan Wonka candy shop here you speaking with Nathan the bear hi Nathan the bear this Nathan Wonka here I got some things for you to sell in your candy shop said Nathan Wonka sweet can we pick it up today I send Zebedee to your chocolate factory say in a hour said Nathan the bear ok said Nathan Wonka then hang up the phone and waited for Zebedee to come in a hour a hour went past and there was a knock at the door Nathan Wonka went downstairs and open the door where those things you said we can sell in our Nathan Wonka candy shop said Zebedee I just get them said Nathan Wonka so Nathan called his Oompa Loompas to get his stuff and then come down with the stuff so the Oompa Loompas came down with the stuff and here you are said Nathan Wonka thanks said Zebedee and then he took off then Nathan Wonka went to bed after he couldn’t see Zebedee anymore so Nathan Wonka went to his bedroom and went to sleep and then got up the next morning at 10am and grab the newspaper on the front page it said Willy Wonka sells he chocolate factory to Nathan Wonka and then the phone rang hi said Nathan Wonka here who is this? Said Nathan Wonka its Nathan the bear I would like to interview you for the news tonight about the golden ticket and who going to come to your chocolate factory said Nathan the bear ok said Nathan Wonka ok I will be there at 6:00pm ok so Nathan Wonka went to see what new things he could make he made a new all day chewing gum for all your foods need for the day and there Nathan rang up Christchurch pet shops for a your pets need so Nathan Wonka rang up the pet shop hi you speaking with Veruca Salt how can I help you? Said Veruca Salt do you have 200 squirrels? Said Nathan Wonka yes we do said Veruca Salt they just come in this morning but you have to be quick they could be sold in a hour Said Veruca Salt ok I be there in half a hour said Nathan so Nathan went down stairs and went back to his 4wrd drive room and said to door Nathan Wonka hi Nathan Wonka how are you today? Said the door good I have to get new things for my chocolate factory I am going get squirrels for my chocolate factory said Nathan Wonka ok said the door you can come in now said the door and then it open it self and then Nathan went to his 4wrd drive and got into the driver seat and took off to the pet shop he was there in half and hour and got out of his 4wrd drive and entered the pet shop and went to where the squirrels is and got the pet shop owner to come over to grab 200 of them and she took them out and put them in a big cage that could fit 200 squirrels in it and then they went up to the counter and Veruca Salt said that would be $1000000 please here you are said Nathan Wonka and there he left the pet shop and put the squirrels cage in the back of his 4wrd drive and took off back to his chocolate factory he was back there in a half a hour time and drove his 4wrd drive though the chocolate factory door and he stop just before the door where he park his 4wrd drive and got out of his 4wrd drive and said to the door Nathan Wonka you back said the door yes I am I got my squirrels now said Nathan Wonka ok said the door you can come in now so Nathan Wonk drove his 4wrd drive though the door an park it up and got out of it and grab his squirrels and bought them to his nut room and then there was a knock at the door Nathan Wonka open the door Hi Nathan Wonka said Zebedee I here for the interview for the news at 6:00pm said Zebedee ok where do want me said Nathan the bear in your lounge said Nathan the bear ok said Nathan Wonka and then Nathan the bear said welcome to the news at 6:00pm I here with Nathan Wonka he going talk about the golden tickets and who is coming to his chocolate factory thanks over to you Nathan Wonka thank said Nathan Wonka to Nathan the bear ok so the golden tickets can be in anything where Nathan Wonka candy are sold and only two people to my chocolate factory so start looking today that’s is all said Nathan Wonka thanks said Nathan the bear we keep to yours update with who has found the golden tickets that’s is the news at 6:00pm for today said Nathan the bear then after the interview Nathan Wonka waited for the news update and two minters later Nathan Wonka turned his tv on on the news and there was a news update I here with Lauren Beauregarde to talk about her sister founding of the golden ticket over to you Lauren Beauregarde ok so my sister gets anything she wants she ask and ask for a golden ticket see are dad owns a nut shop he sells nuts to shops to sell so our dad would keep up search into she can give her what she wanted Holy Salt got more and more upset everyday its was annoying at home she would say where my golden ticket? I want my golden ticket on the third day dad came home with her golden ticket here you are Holly Salt dad I want a new dog said Holly Salt that’s is all of the interview said Lauren Beauregarde back to you Nathan the bear thanks for that said Nathan the bear that is all of the updates for now and for tonight Lauren Beauregarde that’s was so mean said Holly Salt you would of done the same said Lauren Beauregarde I will when you find your golden ticket said Holly Salt that is fine said Lauren Beauregarde then they went to sleep and so did Nathan Wonka and then it was the next day Nathan turned on his tv and there was a news update the last golden ticket has been be found by a girl called Violet Beauregarde the search is over no more people to Nathan Wonka chocolate factory that’s is all the news update for now anymore but Lauren Beauregarde went to a shop and thought she would try one more time so she went into shop and she bought a Nathan Wonka chewing gum and started chewing on it and something fall when she started chewing the gum is was gold Lauren Beauregarde pick it up it was the last golden ticket is was not end of the search of the golden tickets the last one was not found it was a fake said the shop owner there the last golden ticket in that girl hand I give you the best chewing gum for that ticket do want that girl? Said someone in the shop hey leave that girl alone girl run home and don’t let anyone have that golden ticket said the shop owner thanks said Lauren Beauregarde and then she ran straight home and when so got home she ran into the lounge I got the last golden ticket its mine said Lauren Beauregarde you are pulling our leg Lauren Beauregarde said her family no I not she it for yourself she grave the ticket to Holly Salt its true she has found the golden ticket said Holly Salt I bet the news will be here to interview Holly Salt about her sister founding of the golden ticket said her parents and into minutes there was a knock at the door hi we are here to do interview for the news and here is Holly Salt said her family and then the news did the interview welcome to the news at 12pm the last ticket has been found by a girl name Lauren Beauregarde over to you Holly Salt thanks said Nathan the bear ok so my sister chew gum all day long and one day she went to Nathan Wonka house and at his breakfast chewing gum and turned it a big fat blueberry girl she was lucky Nathan Wonka could turn back her into a normal girl and then she found the last golden ticket in a Nathan Wonka chewing gum and she is still chewing gum now that all of the interview said Holly Salt back to Nathan the bear thanks for that said Nathan the bear that’s is all of the news updates for the year now after the news update Nathan Wonka turned his tv off and went to get ready for bed but before Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt went to bed they read there ticket hi from Nathan Wonka here a rules what you must do to come to my chocolate factory I will show you around my chocolate factory myself you will have to sigh something when you get there you are aloud to bring one of your family member on the 11th of April at 10am into then Nathan Wonka 11th April that’s tomorrow said Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt we all better go to bed said Lauren Beauregarde and Holly Salt parents so they did Lauren Beauregarde put her chewing Gum In the bin and was going to start and new piece of gum tomorrow so they all went to bed it was the next day Nathan Wonka got up at 5:00am and had breakfast and got his chocolate factory ready for when the people when they come to his chocolate factory he was done in a hour and then he check on his squirrels and feed them then he went to bed again he set alarm for 9:00am is was 8:00am when Lauren Beauregarde family got up had breakfast Lauren Beauregarde just chew her new chewing gum for breakfast when her family ate breakfast they got dress and got into the car and took off to Nathan Wonka chocolate factory it would take them 1 hour to get there it was hour and Lauren Beauregarde family got to Nathan Wonka cholate factory they did not go near it they waited for Nathan Wonka to come out its was 9:00am Nathan Wonka got up and saw Lauren Beauregarde and her family but it was not 10am yet it was only 9:00am still and 55 minutes later Holly Salt said to her dad what the time it is not 10am yet dear said make time go faster said Holly Salt eyes on the prize said Lauren Beauregarde mum and 10am Nathan went outside and open his factory gates but before he did that he push a button near his bed to turn everything into his chocolate factory that did not belong it would hide for the chocolate factory then he went outside and waited for kids to come forward come forward one at a time said Nathan Wonka lady first said Holly Salt dad so Holly Salt run as fast as she could to meet Nathan Wonka when she got there golden ticket please here you are said Holly Salt can I have my golden ticket is the end of the tour? Said Holly Salt sure you can but Nathan Wonka tore it in half what is your name? Said Nathan Wonka it is Holly Salt said Holly Salt I get everything I want said Holly Salt I hope I get this chocolate factory at the end of the tour said Holly Salt ok that’s is all next please Lauren Beauregarde came forward chewing her gum I am Lauren Beauregarde what gum you got here? Nice girl you got here who are you? Said Lauren Beauregarde I am Nathan Wonka on with the tour before you go you must sigh your name on that big sigh over there what dose it say on the bouton? Said Lauren Beauregarde it says if everything happen to you you will not sue the chocolate factory owner and he workers so sigh away said Nathan Wonka so Lauren Beauregarde sigh away and then Holly Salt did to that’s carry on said Nathan Wonka the first room on the tour is the chewing gum said Nathan Wonka chewing gum I love gum said Lauren Beauregarde before you go in you must not touch anything said Nathan Wonka ok said Lauren Beauregarde so Nathan Wonka unlock the door to the chewing gum room and lead them to a big machine called the chewing gum machine and push a button on it and then the stick of gum came out of the big machine is that all? Said Holly Salt that all don’t you knows what it is? Said Nathan Wonka it gum said Lauren Beauregarde right are it 3 course meal all by it self anything you want you just think of what you want and it will know what you want hand of this gum and we will see if it work said Lauren Beauregarde it not ready yet if you eat it the side effects could be deadly on you the last girl that tried it blow up and guts and body parts everywhere so I would not eat it if I was you I don’t care if so long if it gum that enough for me but before Nathan Wonka could stop Lauren Beauregarde Lauren Beauregarde took her old price if gum and gave it to her mum and started chewing the 3 course gum meal here come breakfast wheat bix with hot milk and sugar said Lauren Beauregarde here come dinner chicken soup and bread and for after dinner blue berry and ice cream it hot and good I hope I don’t blow up said Lauren Beauregarde what happen to her nose said Holly Salt
Posted on: Mon, 12 Aug 2013 07:27:09 +0000

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