Hi everyone . I wrote a short story to improve my English language. But i looking for your help to make any notes on it. The story is fiction about cool weather in Bulgaria. I will be grateful for helping me. (((December 2009 Bulgaria, I was recently moved into a new apartment in the center of Burgas city. The weather was blizzard as I heard in the news and the temperature was -10. I’m going to tell you what happened to me at first night there, I cannot forget it. I was sitting watching TV. I was feeling gradually cool even though the electric heating system was working. Although, I dressed up two jackets, lingerie and pajama and 3 Socks, I was still feeling freezing. It had become 11 P.M, so I went to bed and I had Covered with 2 blankets I tried to sleep, unfortunately I could not sleep one minute because of cooler atmosphere. My mouth was trembling from the cold, I felt that my heart going to stop from the cold such as I fell down in ice sea in Alaska. In the morning I got up from bed and I prepared my Luggage for departure, I came down to the owner who was living on the second floor and told him that I will leave the apartment and gave him keys and I had explained him why, I am going to leave and he had apologized and he told me that Split Unit ( electric heating system) blocked because of ice frozen over it. he returned me back part of the amount of rent for a month that you have paid in advance.. In the evening I had found an excellent apartment in the city center, whose the gas heating system this time, after a long journey looking for a new accommodation.))) CHEERS
Posted on: Wed, 14 May 2014 21:08:41 +0000
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